HYM and HUR, a short story by Phillip Frey
About the Book:
In this fantasy-comedy Hym and Hur are a young couple who never age and have been in love for more than a century. They also possess an array of magical abilities, two of which are either to play pranks on humankind or to perform good deeds. Enacting both at the same time is now what gets them into trouble, especially since it’s the character of Death they must deal with to bring their plans to fruition.
The prank Hym and Hur have come up with must first be agreed upon by Death, who happens to be a rambunctious, difficult character. Once agreed upon, the prank is set in motion. But then Hym and Hur soon discover that Death had tricked them into a contract with dire consequences for all of us.
During their attempt to break the contract, Hym and Hur try to save the relationship of an earthbound couple, knowing they are truly meant for each other. A good deed that will bring Hym and Hur even more trouble.
I read this story a few months ago, at the request of the author, so this review is based on my recollections of the experience. I do remember having a mixed reaction to it. The story has an echo of Piers Anthony’s Incarnations of Immortality series, with the idea of characterizing amorphous concepts such as Death as individuals doing a job.
As I recall, the reader has to puzzle out the exact nature of who or what the main characters are, but whether that was because the short story format didn’t allow much time for explanations or simply done to make them appear more intriguing, I don’t know. Either way, I would have preferred more in the way of setting the scene.
The prank that they play is cleverly done, and the overall story was enjoyable. I would be open to reading more stories about these characters that would develop their personalities more.